Post by Rue Tian Slyth7 on Nov 19, 2007 10:45:45 GMT -5
Hello, and welcome to Hogwarts Magic! I'm so sorry for how long it's taken to get to your approval, but life caught up with me and then I lost track of the site. 
Anyway, onto your approval.
What you have here is great, but there are a few minor changes to be made, but first - let me answer your question. All new members are required to apply for a first through third year for their first character. Their second character, if the staff feels it's appropriate, will be a 4th or 5th year. Their third character will be a 6th or 7th character. That kind of thing.
1- There are a few grammar errors. Just change those, and resubmit it in this thread.
Name: Julissa Mortari
Age: 11
Year: 1st
House: Hufflepuff
Blood: Half blood
Pet: Small short haired calico kitten named Sir Caledon Norbert Smikey the 2nd. Also knowed as Bandy
Wand: 10 inch, cherry wood, unicorn hair
Physical Description: Julissa is a bit short for age, has naturally curly dark brown hair, dark green eyes and tan skin. She is a bit on the thin side, with dainty shoulders, skinny legs, and a flat stomach, but even at the tender age of 11, she's got a bigger chest than some 4th year student and people often think she is older than she really is.
Personality Description: Julissa is reserved, not to be confused with shy, and doesnt talk to many people until she really knows them. Then she opens up and others find that she is very bold and quite funny when she wants to be. She is fiercely loyal to people she loves and will put up a fight for them and for what she believes is good and just, but she is a peacemaker at heart and usually the mediator in fights between her friends. She's good natured and smiles alot and is nice to about everyone but she has her badsides of course, like anyone else. Julissa is very honest and doesnt know where the line between honest and rude is, usually getting her in mild trouble with people. She holds grudges a bit longer than she knows she should and is extremely obnoxious at times.
History: Born to a David Mortari, wizard, and Eleana Gains, muggle. Her father a Spainsh born credited rights activist, fighting injustices and prejudices in the wizarding community against werewolves, Squibs, muggles, and other causes. Her mother was an average college student who accidently stumbled on a tricky magical situation - David came to her rescue after a rude Ministry Official tried to take advantage of his power and ablity to wipe minds if you know what we mean. They fell in love, moved to London, and had Jacob (14), Julissa, and Johnson (6). Julissa led a balanced Muggle/Wizarding life until Hogwarts and a very happy childhood.
Any additional information: Collects useless items from Muggle and Wizarding celebrities, only likes reading pointless novels aimed at girls, hates grass, doesnt listen to music that isnt dated before the 1940's, and loves playing in the lake.
Anyway, onto your approval.
What you have here is great, but there are a few minor changes to be made, but first - let me answer your question. All new members are required to apply for a first through third year for their first character. Their second character, if the staff feels it's appropriate, will be a 4th or 5th year. Their third character will be a 6th or 7th character. That kind of thing.
1- There are a few grammar errors.
Just change those, and resubmit it in this thread. Name: Julissa Mortari
Age: 11
Year: 1st
House: Hufflepuff
Blood: Half blood
Pet: Small short haired calico kitten named Sir Caledon Norbert Smikey the 2nd. Also knowed as Bandy
Wand: 10 inch, cherry wood, unicorn hair
Physical Description: Julissa is a bit short for age, has naturally curly dark brown hair, dark green eyes and tan skin. She is a bit on the thin side, with dainty shoulders, skinny legs, and a flat stomach, but even at the tender age of 11, she's got a bigger chest than some 4th year student and people often think she is older than she really is.
Personality Description: Julissa is reserved, not to be confused with shy, and doesnt talk to many people until she really knows them. Then she opens up and others find that she is very bold and quite funny when she wants to be. She is fiercely loyal to people she loves and will put up a fight for them and for what she believes is good and just, but she is a peacemaker at heart and usually the mediator in fights between her friends. She's good natured and smiles alot and is nice to about everyone but she has her badsides of course, like anyone else. Julissa is very honest and doesnt know where the line between honest and rude is, usually getting her in mild trouble with people. She holds grudges a bit longer than she knows she should and is extremely obnoxious at times.
History: Born to a David Mortari, wizard, and Eleana Gains, muggle. Her father a Spainsh born credited rights activist, fighting injustices and prejudices in the wizarding community against werewolves, Squibs, muggles, and other causes. Her mother was an average college student who accidently stumbled on a tricky magical situation - David came to her rescue after a rude Ministry Official tried to take advantage of his power and ablity to wipe minds if you know what we mean. They fell in love, moved to London, and had Jacob (14), Julissa, and Johnson (6). Julissa led a balanced Muggle/Wizarding life until Hogwarts and a very happy childhood.
Any additional information: Collects useless items from Muggle and Wizarding celebrities, only likes reading pointless novels aimed at girls, hates grass, doesnt listen to music that isnt dated before the 1940's, and loves playing in the lake.