Post by Rue Tian Slyth7 on Nov 19, 2007 10:23:56 GMT -5
Hello, and welcome to Hogwarts Magic! I'm so sorry that it's taken me forever to get to your approval process, but I got so busy and then I lost the site... I've only found it recently. Anyway, onto your approval. 
1- All new members are required to start off with a first through third year. So change this and make sure the age matches the year.
2- Your character's wand needs to have a specific length and wood.
3- There needs to be more to your physical description. What does your character like to wear when he's not in uniform? Does he do things to his hair? Etc. This needs to be at least 3 sentences.
4- Personality description needs to be elaborated on as well. This needs to be at least 3 sentences too.
5- History needs more to it. What are his parents like? Any siblings? What are his hobbies? His best and worst classes? Etc. This needs to be at least 6 sentences.
When you have modified your biography you may submit the edited version in this thread. I will then continue with your approval process.
Name: RobbieVan Clief O'Riley
Age:14
Year:5
House: Raven Claw
Blood: pure
Pet: Owl (named Overbite)
Wand: long branch like wand with dragon heart string for core
Physical Description:tall, thin, short brown hair
Personality Description: determined but polite
History: originaly from Ireland, but moved to London
Any additional information I have never seen this website before, but it looks great
1- All new members are required to start off with a first through third year. So change this and make sure the age matches the year.
2- Your character's wand needs to have a specific length and wood.
3- There needs to be more to your physical description. What does your character like to wear when he's not in uniform? Does he do things to his hair? Etc. This needs to be at least 3 sentences.
4- Personality description needs to be elaborated on as well. This needs to be at least 3 sentences too.
5- History needs more to it. What are his parents like? Any siblings? What are his hobbies? His best and worst classes? Etc. This needs to be at least 6 sentences.
When you have modified your biography you may submit the edited version in this thread. I will then continue with your approval process.
Name: RobbieVan Clief O'Riley
Age:14
Year:5
House: Raven Claw
Blood: pure
Pet: Owl (named Overbite)
Wand: long branch like wand with dragon heart string for core
Physical Description:tall, thin, short brown hair
Personality Description: determined but polite
History: originaly from Ireland, but moved to London
Any additional information I have never seen this website before, but it looks great