Valian Malfoy

[Rue Tian Slyth7]

Hello and welcome to Hogwarts Magic.

Unfortunately I can not approve you just yet. There are few things you need to fix.

First and foremost, no one on this site can be related to any book characters. So please erase all mention of Draco Malfoy or the Malfoy name from your biography.

Second, all new members must start with a student in their first through third year. Age must also be appropriate, i.e. No 17 year olds in 2nd year. So please change this part as well.

I'm sorry but we don't allow eagles as pets, since Hogwarts only allows a rat, cat, toad or owl.

I need a bit more detail in all three areas of your Physical Description, personality description, and history (but exclude the bit about being Draco's cousin).

Once you have made all the chnages resubmit the edited version in this thread.

Thanks

Rue

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Name:Valian Malfoy
Age:17
Year:6th
House:Slytherin
Blood:Prueblood
Pet:Eagle
Wand:oak 13'' unicornhair
Physical Description:tall and built
Personality Description:bossy
History:Draco's cousin