Post by Rue Tian Slyth7 on Dec 14, 2006 7:18:39 GMT -5
Hello and welcome to Hogwarts Magic. 
What you have so far is great but I would like to know a little bit more about his history. Where he grew up, what are his parents like, any siblings? Did anything tragic happen when he was younger? Things like that.
Resubmit the modified version of your bio and I'll continue to approve you.
Rue
Name: Alexander Shinoda
Age: 12
Year:3rd
House:Ravenclaw
Blood:Muggle-Born
Pet:None
Wand:12" yew wood with phoenix feather
Physical Description: 5', long black hair, beige skin, has a Gothic look.
Personality Description: A nice guy most of the time, but goes for what he wants when he can get it. Whenever there's something he doesn't understand, he looks it up and does everything he can to gain a decent understanding of it.
History: A muggle-born with a unique personality that sometimes surprises everyone else.
Any additional information: none
What you have so far is great but I would like to know a little bit more about his history. Where he grew up, what are his parents like, any siblings? Did anything tragic happen when he was younger? Things like that.
Resubmit the modified version of your bio and I'll continue to approve you.
Rue
Name: Alexander Shinoda
Age: 12
Year:3rd
House:Ravenclaw
Blood:Muggle-Born
Pet:None
Wand:12" yew wood with phoenix feather
Physical Description: 5', long black hair, beige skin, has a Gothic look.
Personality Description: A nice guy most of the time, but goes for what he wants when he can get it. Whenever there's something he doesn't understand, he looks it up and does everything he can to gain a decent understanding of it.
History: A muggle-born with a unique personality that sometimes surprises everyone else.
Any additional information: none